Planet writing

My Plan

Setting in City

Characters Haylee,Ella and  Me  

Problem everyone has something to do but we don’t

Go to a shop a get a job and get fired

W.A.L.T:1 I can try to hook the reader in and include problem and attempt 2-3 paragraphs.

W.A.L.T:2 I can use links to link my writing.

“We are coming for a landing it will be a bumpy ride hold on tight.We land in a mysterious land on a really big mountain everyone looks so busy.Me,Haylee and Ella start to walk to the town everyone starts to say “Good Morning” they are so polite so we ask a lady what she is doing she said “I am going to work so is everyone else.”

“where do we find a job?” but by the time we said that she had already walk of.

We are just walking by a shop called White chocolate  the smell hit us Ella said we have to go there and check it out !!! so we walk into the shop ask for a job the man said okay Ella can work on making the hot chocolates Haylee can deliver them and Yana can put the toppings on. A few weeks later as I was making a coffee I spilled

some toppings over the floor Haylee was walking thew and slipped on the toppings and the dish went flying and hit a customer and then Ella burned motor on the coffee maker the boss stormed out and we tried to look innocent and he was very mad. You ruined my shop and then we got fired so we walk out and thought what could we do then? “Haylee said I don’t we fit in here I think we should just go home”.