Friday 20 March 2015

Dear mum

Dear mum

"I am very puffed  I was just minding my own bussins when I heard a swoop I looked behind and
A big eagle was flying at me with his yellow beady eyes. It was chasing me all though the foest. I climbed into jimmy a nest (uncle) but the eagle broke his house. I fell but no stopping I ran up a tree
And dug my claws into the dry bark. I finally find a small black hole he got closer arrr I jump  from tree to tree I do a big jump I got to the hole when suddenly SNAP the bark broke luckly I dug my claw and made it yeah" !!!!
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown2 April 2015 at 10:32

    Hi Yana
    I like how you have put (uncle) in brackets and you have written Jimmy a nest

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  2. Anonymous25 May 2015 at 22:25

    Phew! I'm glad you made it, you had me worried.
    Mum

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