Friday 21 August 2015

Hide and seek

    Hide and seek.
5,6,7,8,9,10 ready or not here she comes.
he quickly peeks around the corner of the glass house and it makes a loud BANG!!!
he runs towards the old rusty shed she will never find me here he sits down behind the bins and try not to sneeze from all the dust.
he hears her little foot steps running past the shed.
He’s breathing really loud I hope she does not here me
she stops for a minute and everything is quiet he can hear
her feet on the gravel coming into the shed he hears her whisper are you in here he moves his foot and the gravel makes a noise he  stops moving she comes around the corner I FOUND YOU she shouted!!!!  
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown21 August 2015 at 09:55

    WOW Yana i love how you described with meaning like the BANG love tha

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  2. Unknown10 September 2015 at 09:21

    Hey Summer thank you so much for commenting on my blog
    :)

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  3. Unknown24 September 2015 at 09:31

    WOW
    This Is a wonderful poem
    What tipe of Shed was it
    who was the Girl?

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