Red is the feeling of the hot burning lava bursting from the volcano
Red is the taste of the of a juice strawberry dripping off my chin
Red is the sound of an explosion bursting out of my ears
Red is the colour of a red little poppy that represents
the soldiers.
Hi yana
ReplyDeleteI really liked your piece of writing it was described really well.
I also liked that you made your writing interesting.
From Paris 😛
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ReplyDeleteHi Yana
ReplyDeleteI like your writing and you described it really well and made it interesting
From Haylee
hi good work cool back ground by the way
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem Yana I like reeding it. Bye
ReplyDeleteHi Yana
ReplyDeleteWell done! Yana awesome poem my favourite sentence is red is the colour of a little red poppy that represents the soldiers. :)
From Uncle Gary.